Sunday, August 24, 2008
Speaking life
In the i have a dream speech, martin luther king's pace is somewhat fast. he make a pause in the beginning because i guess he wants to catch his breath so he can saay the rest he has to say. The volume and diction is high. It is very easy to hear the punctuation and understand what he is saying. His tone is somewhat sad. He sounds king of sad because he wants people to agree with what he is saying. In my own words, while a person adresses his speech he should clear his throat first, speak loud and clear, make some eye contact with some of the audience, and find a way of how to convince some of the people.
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This is a good start as far as responding to the assignment. You address all the points asked with some good observations, particularly about tone. However, you should separate diction and volume s they are different techniques.
The assignment asks you to analyze two speeches, and you only did one. As far as formatting, you should use paragraphs and bullet points, as I did in assignment, to make it clear which point you are addressing in your answer. Also, please proofread for mechanics (spelling, capitalization, punctuation).
A good start to your blog.
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